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NYOIL x Nah Right: Who Should Get Lynched?

Every Hip-Hop fan on the planet has a strong opinion about what’s wrong with the current state of the music and who is to blame. In anticipation of the upcoming 7/8 release of his album Hood Treason, I decided to link with the big homey NYOIL and ask the questions:

What’s wrong with the music?
What improvements need to be made?
How can that be accomplished?


The rules:

Download the instrumental and get busy recording your 16 bars on what needs to get better in hip-hop. Rhyme over the beat for “Y’all Should All Get Lynched,” off of NYOIL’s upcoming release, “Hood Treason,” in stores July 8th. Upload your audio or video file to the comments using zshare. Readers, post your comments on who spits the dopest verse and what you think about the current state of the rap game. Whoever records the winning verse will get a guest spot on the next N.Y. Oil release!

Download an mp3 of the instrumental below or go here for a wav file.

Ya’ll Should All Get Lynched Instrumental

Be sure to post your verse in the comments section of this post. All critiques of those verses should also remain on this page if you want your opinion to be heard. This contest will be determined in the trenches of the NR comments. There will be a banner added to the sidebar shortly that will link back to this post for everybody’s convenience.

The deadline for all entries is 7/24/08 at midnight ET.

Related: NYOIL – Ya’ll Should All Get Lynched (Animated Video)


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305 Responses to “NYOIL x Nah Right: Who Should Get Lynched?”

  1. Paperstacker Says:

    This a good look.

  2. FuckUPayMe618 Says:

    You need a hit Give me hour plus a pen and a Pad

  3. FuckUPayMe618 Says:

    Niggas gone be scared to post they shit

  4. rex hussla Says:

    Where’s RIGGA ROMEZ???

  5. D. Billz Says:

    Joe88? landLORD? Feces? Rigz? Dscales?

  6. FuckUPayMe618 Says:

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6G6rlhBsWNM

  7. SNORT_SNORTcrazy88SINCE88 Says:

    1. Lil’Jon
    2. Nelly
    3. Jim Jones
    4. LA Reid @ DefJam
    5. J.D. aka Keebler Elf
    6. Jay-Z (TrendSetting/Swagger)
    7. MC Hammer (MassMarketing ideas, The Blueprint)
    8. The term “Old School Rapper”
    9. female MCs who wanna be “BITCHES/ The Baddest Bitch”
    10. Bloggers. (checks hole in foot)

  8. hoodPolitics Says:

    interesting concept. i’m doing it!

  9. hoodPolitics Says:

    Dumb question: Is NYOIL pronunced “NY-OIL” or “NOIL”?

    *straight face*

  10. pockets Says:

    yoo ima do this, but i need a fuckin microphone for my pc damn damn

  11. kenny Says:

    rofl .. this is awesome .. the guys like a super hero for real . i kinda see some kinda beef with nas in the future tho ..

  12. EnglandRepresent Says:

    My money is on 2Pock to carve this one the fuck up.

  13. pockets Says:

    lolll yooo england wats goooood

  14. Shut Up! Says:

    It would be beneath nas to entertain this man- that is what he wants-Nas to beef with him!

  15. rex hussla Says:

    Karl Strauss Red Trolley Ale >

    yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh

  16. 911 Says:

    Perfect timing and I just started back writing, I’ll pass on being on his album though, no offense. I’ll put something to this tommorow.

    Lou in ya mufuckin hood no drawstrings, just nines their artist they’ll draw flames, lay steel across a nigga carriage like car beams…

    Infinite

  17. EnglandRepresent Says:

    Karl Strauss Red Trolley Ale >

    ^^Nope. Stella Artois > ______

    What up what up Pock. Lace this track with your vocals chief, this is your foot in the door my son. The first Punjabi MC apart from Punjabi MC to get it in.

  18. BEZ Says:

    ^^^FuckYouPayMe618

    LOL! @ that niggas being scared to post & that youtube sh*t.

  19. Jewtino Says:

    1) Lil Wayne
    2) Hurricane Chris
    3) MIMS type rappers who are hot then not even relevant.
    4) Rick Ross
    5) 50 Cent
    6) Nelly
    7) a Remergence of Ja Rule
    8) Anything Hyphy (exclude Too Short & E-40 for thier previous credible contributions)
    9) Anyone who works with Fergie
    10) SOulja Boy

  20. Jewtino Says:

    1) Lil Wayne
    2) Hurricane Chris
    3) MIMS type rappers who are hot then not even relevant.
    4) Rick Ross
    5) 50 Cent
    6) Nelly
    7) a Remergence of Ja Rule
    8) Anything Hyphy (exclude Too Short & E-40 for thier previous credible contributions)
    9) Anyone who works with Fergie
    10) SOulja Boy

  21. TAI Says:

    ok……….and why is this an important contest???? LOL

  22. Dodger Clemens Says:

    very cool idea. where the spitters at?

  23. pockets Says:

    What up what up Pock. Lace this track with your vocals chief, this is your foot in the door my son. The first Punjabi MC apart from Punjabi MC to get it in.

    ^yo eng i never recorded a track before, i dont have a mic, but i was actually kicking around some rhymes and i think i came up wiht some piff…maybe ill try to look for a way to record it, if not ill just slide the lyrics to my man Ray or even u and u could spit it if u want

    lol @ punjabi mc

    the funny thing is when i saw this post i was studying my MCAT book

  24. Nanyanen Says:

    I dont have the teknology to record my bars… not everyone has that kinda loot.

  25. pockets Says:

    I dont have the teknology to record my bars…

    ^yooooo i kinda sorta wanna record what i wrote damn how do i even do this

  26. EnglandRepresent Says:

    yooooo i kinda sorta wanna record what i wrote damn how do i even do this

    ^^Pock, your phone has got a voice recorder on it right? Spit your shit into that and then wack it on the old computer, job done, then save it zshare format and pop it on Nahggers. Easy deals.

    Disclaimer : I have no idea if that will work, I’m spouting bollocks, but it sounds good.

  27. StephenKING Says:

    oh shit i gotta jump on this shit

  28. Mouth of the Truth. Says:

    I got a track I just donno how to get it here…

  29. spotrusherz Says:

    can i do it in spanish?

  30. D_Block_4_life Says:

    Who ever has the nas can you kindly send it to Donthategeorge@aol.com

  31. Kardee Says:

    *july 4th crickets*

    *lurks*

  32. D_Block_4_life Says:

    I got the album, good lookin

  33. I hate blogs Says:

    This is corny as hell. Who the hell wnats to do a song will corny Umc(blue chesse guy). Everybody want to complain and just talk about then make excuses why they didn’t enter. And if thery really could mc they wold been made some and put them on they myspace. Who ever came up with this corny idea should be lynched…..

  34. digital scales Says:

    thursdays > fridays

    ima def drop a 16 on this beat, its pretty dope….

    yo d block send me that nas mamao

  35. D_Block_4_life Says:

    They have it here my nigga

    ganstarap.blogspot.com/2008/07/nas-untitled-2008-ysp.html

  36. D_Block_4_life Says:

    I dont wanna get ahead of myself but this album mannn….shyt i dunoooo B your dude might of dropped a classic…

  37. Kardee Says:

    yo can someone send that nas to me plz? kardisfc at gmail

  38. Kardee Says:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/1443745939434ff7/

  39. Kardee Says:

    http :// www. zshare. net/ audio/ 1443745939434ff7/

  40. spotrusherz Says:

    i’m not feeling the nas album after the first listen.

    free at last is still the best hiphop album of the last 3 years.

  41. spirit equality Says:

    http:// www. zshare.net/video/14680512ceee977b/

    we can’t post links on here? must be some anti-spam thing. anyway, that’s my contribution. tried to edit out the beginning to no avail. i’m not so tech savvy. long time lurker. will contribute more to the boards.

  42. Shut Up! Says:

    nas album is hot- lisiten again! you may have been sleep!^^^^

  43. Plug Says:

    They have it here my nigga

    ganstarap.blogspot.com/2008/07/nas-untitled-2008-ysp.html
    ———————-
    ad3.bannerbank.ru/bb.cgi may cause a breach of browser security.

    *daps mcAfee site advisor*

    who does def jam think they are lockin down the nas like this?!?!?!?! all the links are gone.

  44. D_Block_4_life Says:

    False plug i have a site that has it if you want me to email me it to you…..lemme know

  45. joe giveafuck Says:

    nyoil is gonna have a serious identity crisis when he sees his legion of white fans singing these lyrics. it’s gonna be dave chappelle 2.0

  46. Plug Says:

    I think I got it

  47. D_Block_4_life Says:

    This album is a lyrical master piece, i really thought music like this was extinct….this is a great time for HIP HOP HEAD’S, word up! Even though their will be a bias opinion on this album because of the content, it still reeks of classical material and time will and always is the deciding factor on whether or not an album is a classic. With that said an album like this has never been done and if it has this albums expertise makes any othe not relevant. Nas coming out with somthing like in 2008 in unprecedented.

    *daps Nas*

  48. Plug Says:

    how many tracks you got?

  49. D_Block_4_life Says:

    ^^
    *Waits for somone to in inevitably refute my assessment*

  50. D_Block_4_life Says:

    Theres 15 on the Retail

  51. Plug Says:

    On the real, Im gonna break down and get nas whole collection. so far I got nastrodamis, it was written, lost tapes. ive bought all of them at leas twice but somebody keeps gafflin them

  52. Nanyanen Says:

    i got a 16 for the nyoil cat. if i can record it can someone use protools put the vocals in synch with the instru?

  53. D_Block_4_life Says:

    Plug i do alot when ever i hear something really good from someone that i dont usually listen to, i go back and listen to everything they have done….

  54. Plug Says:

    on the real nas is like the only cat that hasnt lost a lyrical step over the years…. him and busta rhymes.

  55. Plug Says:

    Oh I gotta add the first be a nigga too to this cd…

    I copped goo gobbs of fireworks last night. Im bout to be hustling all day. I by them buy 1 get 2 free and then flip them shits for the sticker price. applaud my hustle

  56. D_Block_4_life Says:

    plug i put this as the intro and queens get money as the 2nd track

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/1438174696636fca/

  57. D_Block_4_life Says:

    I stopped fucking with the fireworks….the Boys are locking niggas (no Untilted) up in BK for that shyt…..so i stick to gettin drunk and bbQ’s

  58. and the winner is... Says:

    forreal..i almost put the pen down on this beat… then i really listened to the beat…the hook is so bad..why? why did you do that? all get lynched? are you serious? if you ever saw anyone get lynched you would never make that the hook….i know nas is trying to make a statement and sell records at the same time, but come on forreal. this is killing the point your trying to make….

    *i wrote this after i wrote the comment on above…on the spot…

    lynch em, i dont want to hear all that/
    a better question is what do You call rap/
    whats a hipster look like…if your my son/
    you would never spit in the face of KRS-ONE/
    just to think, Doctor King would turn over in his grave/
    for you being as racist as all the owners of the braves/
    all artists want are there masters, call em owners of the slaves/
    so if your a role model, acted a little older for your age/

  59. Plug Says:

    I forgot about nigga hatrid.

    yeah. I imagine they be strick on explosives in ny.

    whats the forth of july without seeing ninjas limbs get blown off because they too drunk to realize they have a morter ball in they hand.

    One year before they got strick, this cat came thru wit 3 fingers hanging on by skin only. dude was like he needed more fireworks to make the kids happy. Im like “dude make me happy and ripp them 3 fingers off and put em in your pocket. shits makin me queezy”

  60. D_Block_4_life Says:

    Lol wow homie was high of some firecrackers, When i was younger niggas used to put M-80 and Cherry Bombs in pay phones (no papoose) and blow the change out….

    *ahhh good times*

  61. D_Block_4_life Says:

    There 2 bonus tracks off untilted but those will prob be out after the album officially drops

  62. CelebritiesAreAliens Says:

    HIS WIDE FACE ASS NEEDS TO BE LYNCHED

  63. G7 Says:

    nas is notorious for leaving the best songs off his albums. whether its dropping hotter songs months before the album that don’t make it, or after. i hope this time around he puts the absolute best tracks on Untitled.

  64. gr3um5 Says:

    mos-def-stakes-high-live-revivedalive

  65. bkboy Says:

    NYOIL>Good Dude! Like a 2008 chuck d.

  66. Joe 88 Says:

    For the record

    I WAS THE FIRST TO SAY Untitled > The nigger tape

  67. boi-dan Says:

    “I ordered my burger with no cheese, why is cheese on here. Bitch you are giong to get lynched.” NYOil in Wendys

  68. Plug Says:

    car wash-check

    chrome gleaming- check

    lemon pledge on woodgrain- check

    diapers and wipes for plug jr.- check

    subwoofers- check check

    today’s high temp- 75

  69. Joe 88 Says:

    LF: All this week, everyday, i’ve been having this crazy dream that I bump into this dude that I got beef with, every night, but in different situations, the one yesterday was the most vivid, the dream started off with me finding out that the nig I got beef with moved on my block, so I instantly confronted him, I hit em over the head with 2 alley bottles, (cause I don’t fight fair in real life) knocking him out, I left em there leaking. So later on that day I get a call from someone else I knew, I answer the phone & he was on three way & said “oh you in the house? Bitch nigga, i’m out front”, soon as he said that, I grab the burner & was about to run to the door, that’s when I woke up, but the shit felt so real, I woke up & ran to the door anyway, I realized it was a dream, but it took atleast 5 minutes for me to calm down. Everytime I keep having the same dream, something happens, i’m bout to go hunting on some rambo shit, just to get this over with, I can’t take it, make me feel like i’m the one in fear, when it’s the total opposite. A nicca confused, but not for long.

    *Re schedule weekend plans*

  70. Ghost Writer Says:

    That Nas album sounds like the old him……it’s good I like it…..but I wish he kept that track that the producer for Dr. Dre previewed a few months back……I can’t remember the name…..but that beat was sick…..

  71. Plug Says:

    untitled or AG?????

  72. b-ease Says:

    *daps Nah brethren*

    Whats good, how much time we got?

  73. Ghost Writer Says:

    Plug Says:

    July 4th, 2008 at 9:58 am
    untitled or AG?????

    ^
    I don’t know yet….I’ll have to listen to that nas again to tell…..

  74. Joe 88 Says:

    Plug Says:
    July 4th, 2008 at 9:58 am
    untitled or AG?????

    ^Me being the vice chairman of the Jay-Z stan club, I am not allowed to answer that question.

    *Pulls out gun that shoot bullets the size of a pringles can*

    No one else can answer that question either

  75. spirit equality Says:

    i tried to submit my entry hours ago. it still says waiting for moderation. maybe eskay wanted a real email address? well, this time i actually gave one. lol.

    http:// www. zshare. net/video/14680512ceee977b/

  76. D. Billz Says:

    lmao @ Joe88… pay attention to your dreams fam. Pay verrrry close attention.

    *dapz all in attendance*

    Spotrusherz says:

    free at last is still the best hiphop album of the last 3 years.

    ^Yo, for real? Mannnn… I couldn’t stop listening to that album. People say that it wasn’t better than PF. I’m like, PF is a CLASSIC, but Free stepped it up and really got personal on the sophomore joint PLUS he switched up the flow and still had the best production. I’m gonna go on a limb and say that FAL > PF.

    On the way back from GA in May, I listented to “I Cry” on repeat on the Zune. If you can’t feel that song you aint been through shit.

  77. Plug Says:

    HNIC2 >> Free at last

  78. Plug Says:

    SMH at this chick texting me asking to pay to get her toes done.

    beeyatch you got me fukked up.

  79. D. Billz Says:

    Plug Says:

    July 4th, 2008 at 10:49 am
    HNIC2 >> Free at last

    ^I’m also gonna go out on a limb and say that’s gay for making me take sides (no bunkmate debates).

  80. D. Billz Says:

    Plug

    Free At Last > HNIC2

    *lights M-80*

    *throws it in Plug’s whip as he drives by*

    *laughs*

  81. spotrusherz Says:

    Spotrusherz says:

    free at last is still the best hiphop album of the last 3 years.

    ^Yo, for real? Mannnn… I couldn’t stop listening to that album. People say that it wasn’t better than PF. I’m like, PF is a CLASSIC, but Free stepped it up and really got personal on the sophomore joint PLUS he switched up the flow and still had the best production. I’m gonna go on a limb and say that FAL > PF.

    On the way back from GA in May, I listented to “I Cry” on repeat on the Zune. If you can’t feel that song you aint been through shit.

    ^^

    word, the song with rick ross is the only joint on that album that i dont consider a banger, plus once you get into his rhyme scheme you get addicted to it, i be like yo why these other rappers still on that simple shit

  82. Relyk 5000 Says:

    http://www.zshare.net/download/14668282fa7f29c9/

    here is the relyk 5000’s RMX of NY-Oil’s classic Ya’ll should all get lynched

  83. pockets Says:

    aii fuck it, ima just copy/paste the lyrics i came up with for the ny-oil track. if anyone wants to spit these lyrics over the track, knock urself out

    start instrumental at 2:20

    the checklist of those who should get lynched goes
    those in charge shortening real talent like Crisco
    the ones too fake to take off the glisten n jewels
    off their bodies cuz they’re scared of depicting the truth
    listen the chains and Range is just a marketing ploy
    for capitol cuz per capita they need to capitolize
    it trickles down from the nerve of the federal reserve
    the stealing mentality is especially absurd
    while those with the vision are never the observed
    and those worthy of the glory are negatively heard
    im smackin the wisdoms out of adam smith capitalism
    raps need to be attackin the system that has our blacks n latins in prisons
    n it all goes back to wat the people listen to
    follow no man, and, they will follow u
    hard work and due pays is uncommon hence
    we need more lupe’s and common sense, the rest should all get lynched

  84. BASHWON Says:

    Damn, Nigger Hatred wouldve been the perfect intro for Untititled. Nas is always leaving the jewels off his albums. The Lost Tapes had all sorts of songs that shouldve been on his regular releases. (n/h)

  85. Nick Breton Says:

    I still can’t figure out how to post an MP3 so here’s my 16:

    Damn right now I can call em all out/
    Buck on the phone cryin’ to 50 right now/
    Thought the whole Unit claimed dirty from the South/
    Who Bluffin I TAKE YA CHIPS RIGHT NOW/
    No limit man, can’t play just fold em/
    Solja n Ice T fuck it man keep rollin’/
    Shug on the floor, no he not posin’/
    You candy Mal Fuckas say it’s all good now?/
    Wanye sold a million, guess I’m doin drugs now/
    Maybe I’ll do a dance and just get the fuck out/
    No love that’s all ya’ll talk about/
    You hold each other down go ahead walk it out/
    Deek on the Mic and I’m doin it right/
    Passion and the gift that were given to me/
    I pay homage and respect to all those around me/
    You made the Oregon trail now I’ll grow the last seed/

    If you wanna hear it lemme know,
    Deek

  86. Nanyanen Says:

    Some good bars dropped on here…

    pockets, nick, and the w. spirit om still waiting on the download of your flick.

    I’ll drop minez, but they are aimed at NYOIL not at raps enemies overall.

    Fuck zsharing a file, muhfukka we’ll rhyme in person.
    Fight Klub, 10g’s. The liver version of Tyler Durden.

  87. Nanyanen Says:

    Some good bars dropped on here…

    pockets, nick, and the w. spirit om still waiting on the download of your flick.

    I’ll drop minez, but they are aimed at NYOIL not at raps enemies overall.

    Fuck zsharing a file, muhfukka we’ll rhyme in person.
    Fight Klub, 10g’s. The liver version of Tyler Durden.
    I’m schizophrenic, my shit’s authentic, your shit’s pathetic.
    Mine’s is discovered, yours was invented. Stay gassed up but your gas is unleaded.
    I’m deisel. U the type to clowned…. or mushed.
    Ya name’s NY OIL; We know you’re down with George Bush.
    Plus ya rhymes are straight ass like you rhyme in a toilet.
    More bitch than Buck’s call. Tell me why you record it?
    Nah right squadron keepin the torch lit.
    Ether 1080 degreez I spit greaze at this Oil bitch.
    Who should get lynched? YOU should get lynched!
    Question’s like lookin at the rap game and askin ‘who doesn’t fit?’
    You got no mic presence, plus you look goofy as shit.
    I’m sure to tie my lines tighter so the noose doesn’t slip.
    Of all the MC’s in the whole earth, nyoyles worst.
    Case closed. JIC I throw no homo on this whole verse.

  88. and the winner is... Says:

    I LOVE HOW EVERYONE PUT UP THERE LYRICS AFTER ME… THATS WHATS NEEDS TO HAPPENED…

  89. BASHWON Says:

    the problem with posting a bunch of written verses is yeah, it might read really well but the delivery/voice/style might sound suspect in audio. NETcees are notorious for that. NYOil isnt going to select somebody off of a written alone, go cop a cheap mic/mixer/recording program and lay some vocals.

  90. rex hussla Says:

    ALL YOU GUYS HAVING TROUBLE POSTING YOUR TRACKS…TAKE HTTP OFF YOUR LINK…THAT MODERATES IT

  91. edgar c. Says:

    blog.audiojungle.net/resources/8-free-cross-platform-apps-for-musicians/

    for those of u that need some type of recording software…

    and if u need a mic that shit is cheaper now to…

    search for usb condenser microphone in google and there is bound to be some shit u can afford…

  92. Nick Breton Says:

    How can I upload my track!?

  93. H Dot Smyth Says:

    Clearly you just need to repeat the word “bloggers” for 16 bars and you’ve got it.

  94. Nanyanen Says:

    ^^ zshare.com

  95. Nick Breton Says:

    zshare.com… Then what?

  96. Hip Hop Head Says:

    Where is “esco let’s go” on this Nas leak?? The Khalil track?

  97. pockets Says:

    hey nanya nice bars, i liked this: I’m sure to tie my lines tighter so the noose doesn’t slip.

    @edgar: tx for the heads up but im prolly not gonna record, i just felt like pasting my lyrics so what i wrote didnt go to waste

  98. StephenKING Says:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14775693829f80ca/

    These are my verses for the contest
    hope yall like
    critics dont be too harsh lol

    StephenKING – Yall should all get lynched (remix)

  99. StephenKING Says:

    if u like i got more music at
    http://www.myspace.com/milez704

  100. StephenKING Says:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14775693829f80ca/
    StephenKING – Yall should all get lynched (remix)

    These are my verses for the contest
    hope yall like
    critics dont be too harsh lol

  101. NYOIL Says:

    Stephen King..
    I heard your joint.. that 2nd and 3rd verse was Aiight fam!!

    It sound like you had to rush a little bit to get it done.. so u didn’t get a chance to sit and live with that cadence.. it’s ill but it’s one of them slick cadences you gotta master so it sound right. .. But I’m feeling it fam.
    I like how u approached the issue too.. made it your own build instead of just following what i was saying.. and at the same time stayed true to the essence of the song..
    Big ups!!

    can’t wait to hear more..

    NYOIL

  102. NYOIL Says:

    For my dudes posting lyrics.. from what I read them shits is HARD!!! Thing is we gotta hear that cadence and voice quality..

    Trust that when we work on the second album.. the song you get to be on is HARDer than a muthafugga.. for real.. So take some time to get that joint right.

    By the way.. if you don’t know how to get your vocals up on your computer.. because you don’t have any equipment.. lemme know .. I’ll post a link to a place you can cop some real software (for free) and all you’ll need is a mic..

    shit don’t gotta sound studio quality .. just gotta be clear enough to hear.

  103. StephenKING Says:

    Thanks NYOIL
    I did kinda rush it
    the first verse i definatly did
    i did that verse last
    i kinda worked backwards

    Imma record it over for u

  104. StephenKING Says:

    as a matter a fact imma do another version to show u that im versatile
    ill slow down the flow a bit

  105. StephenKING Says:

    NYOIL
    here is another track i did
    one of my best with great content
    hope u listen it may help

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/1481624388efe412/

    StephenKING – Undercontrol

  106. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    THIS IS THE LINK TO MY SHIT OVER THE YOU SHOULD ALL GET LYNCHED TRACK. HOPE YALL DIGG IT. CHUCHHH FROM CALIFORNIA

    http://www.zshare.net/download/148367125cbdcd16/

  107. Nato Caliph Says:

    Peace God,

    First I’d like to say that I really appreaciate what you are doing with this here. I’d also like to say that, that last mixtape you did with DJ Trackstar here in St. Louis is really gett’in some love around town. My verse will be available for download as soon as I leave the plantation today. I will also post the lyrics as well. So look out for that, and check the god out http://www.myspace.com/natocaliph

    Oh yeah, I will be snatch’in up the album tomorrow… Peace God

    move…

    Nato Caliph “Cipher Inside” in stores now…

  108. BigGunn Says:

    Sup all. Some cool stuff up here so far.

    I had a few hours to spare and I did 2 versions. I’ve decided on this one, so I hope ya’ll like it.

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/1487650844b40ef0/

    Wes

  109. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    MY REMIX OF YOU SHOULD ALL GET LYNCHED. HOPE YALL DIGG IT. THIS IS MY SUBMISSION FOR THE CONTEST. WEST UP. CHUCHHHHH

    http://www.zshare.net/download/148367125cbdcd16/

  110. BigGunn Says:

    Hey Uptown, very nice flow man!

  111. BigGunn Says:

    Hey NYOIL, It seems that heads are rocking full songs on this track. Not sure where I got the idea from but I only did 16 bars. If you want I can add the other verse I dropped onto this track since that’s just a copy and paste job. I’m all outta time for writtin’ and spittin’. Let me know.

    Wes

  112. Nato Caliph Says:

    Peace,

    This is Nato Caliph, I’m posting the lyrics to my verse first and then the link at the bottom. I can also send you the Pro Tools session if need be. Thanks for the opportunity, peace God.

    “Now-a-days all I see is zombies and slaves, coons Mantan‘in for pay, like our ancestors didn’t take part in slave trade. I ain’t say ‘in Hip Hop is solely to blame, but we used to have an element of truth, guess corporate dollars made change. We endorse liquid crack, degrade our women for the world as proof, like “Keep ‘in it Real…” is the absolute truth, on the PTA in private, but a killer in the booth, what’s worse, these are the values that we instill in our youth. Instead of fight ‘in the good fight, we’d rather fight each other, and fell in love with a garden tool name for sistas and mothers. And I ain’t against have ‘in fun, but lets restore the balance; so for every song about the club, we need 2 stopp’in the violence. So if you’re, hear’in this verse by Nato Caliph, your either nod ‘in in agreement, or grit ‘in your teeth. The Revolution is upon us, though normally I’m Peace, St. Louis with NYOIL set ‘in our Culture Free…”

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14883707c60c0da5/

    move…

  113. BigGunn Says:

    NYOIL, I just tried the copy and paste, and it doesn’t work, since the vrs was written for the same spot as my current submission. It only works well in that spot, so imma leave it as is. Thanks for the op!

    Nato, nice submission. I like your sound man.

    Wes

  114. spirit equality Says:

    sounds cool so far, big up to everybody that stepped up to the plate. i was looking forward to seeing more feedback on all the submissions (not just mine, everyone). there weren’t that many to listen to, so it’d be nice to hear what folks thought. i randomly did mine at 5 in the morning. lol.

  115. spirit equality Says:

    nato, you got a dope mic presence, fam. that classic authoritative emcee voice.

  116. StephenKING Says:

    damn everybody so far got dope bars
    i might have to redo my verse and step my game up lol

  117. Nato Caliph Says:

    Thanks for the look BigGunn and spirit equality, I appreciate it. If you get a chance, and want to hear more, check out my album “Cipher Inside” on iTunes or anywhere on the net. Let me know what you think. Thanks again, Peace.

  118. Nanyanen Says:

    Aight.
    I recorded my diez y seis using some half-assed program…
    the mic has a lot of static but if you can hear through it then I thank u for listening.

    Bless,

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/148991323fe35022/

  119. Tha Advakit Says:

    Here’s my shit. Check it out and the myspace.com/ecadvakit

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14903476abd50654/

  120. Tha Advakit Says:

    Check me out, and at http://www.myspace.com/ecadvakit

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14903476abd50654/

  121. Tha Advakit Says:

    Check mine out!

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14903476abd50654/

  122. Tha Advakit Says:

    MY VERSE:

    The game needs versatility, performances with energy//
    infinitely humility, conformity is minimally//
    i’m enraged dig wack rappers a grave//
    take the shackles of ya brain yall are mentally slaves//
    every song contains drug violence
    and misogony, obviously record execs are bias//
    I get rid of the bling, material things//
    replace em with books, have em shook, they are readING//
    you gotta play a good rapper for every wack one//
    cuz you gotta be fair now there’s affirmative action//
    replace video girls with strong black queens//
    who are fully clothed it shows that they aint obscene//
    originality please, no raps over millie//
    and really these rappers should be humble no egos (eagles) like philly//
    no discriminating, faking, or region hating//
    no beefing, jus denzel, great debating….

    CHECK MINE’S OUT!
    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14903476abd50654/

  123. and the winner is... Says:

    and the winner is… Says:
    July 4th, 2008 at 7:47 am
    forreal..i almost put the pen down on this beat… then i really listened to the beat…the hook is so bad..why? why did you do that? all get lynched? are you serious? if you ever saw anyone get lynched you would never make that the hook….i know nas is trying to make a statement and sell records at the same time, but come on forreal. this is killing the point your trying to make….

    *i wrote this after i wrote the comment on above…on the spot…

    lynch em, i dont want to hear all that/
    a better question is what do You call rap/
    whats a hipster look like…if your my son/
    you would never spit in the face of KRS-ONE/
    just to think, Doctor King would turn over in his grave/
    for you being as racist as all the owners of the braves/
    all artists want are there masters, call em owners of the slaves/
    so if your a role model, acted a little older for your age/
    _____________________________________________

    shout out to all my haters…Dey Know!
    copy and paste the link…this is my sixteen…
    And The Winner Is….
    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14921319ce9c9fc5/

  124. and the winner is... Says:

    just listen to everyone else on the board….im feelin it except one that turned it into a battle…but yeah yall all did your thing thats for sure…keep making music and keep it positive if you arent knockin off heads already…until next time..

  125. spirit equality Says:

    i just added one because i disagree with the idea of saying you want to ‘lench’ rappers you happen not to like. expressing black love by expressing a wish to kill (some) black people? too contradictory to ever make sense. i didn’t really expect ny oil to respond to that, though.

  126. BigGunn Says:

    I just realized that I don’t know this…does anyone know the due date for these entries?

    For some reason I thought it was today, but I’m guessing it’s because it’s the only date listed on the page I’ve found. Let me know if I missed something, or if anyone knows. Thanks.

    Wes

  127. StephenKING Says:

    yes i would like to know the due date too
    i know that Nyoil’s album comes out todat, maybe thats what date u saw BigGunn.

    i wanna do another one so it would be very helpfull to know the due date though.

  128. girl thunder Says:

    MOMOWILLY NEED TO SPIT A VERSE ON THAT TRACK! SHE’S NASTY WITH THE LYRICS!!!

  129. Trackstar the DJ Says:

    What up Momo I see you!

    Peace, Nato and NY…

    All the lyrics look good, I haven’t had time to download all the tracks but I’ma definitely keep an eye here…

    Join us at nyoil1.ning.com…

    Get that NYOil mix (free download) at my site, and COP THAT ALBUM TODAY!!!!!!! Mine’s already shipped, word to Amazon.

  130. Nanyanen Says:

    Seriously, I just heard everyone’s jawns and Uptown’s is the best by far. More gun talk than necessary, imo, but that shit is fuego.

  131. Nato Caliph Says:

    Apologies to all those who had to wait for the 19 and half MB download of my original posting. I thought I’d go ahead and throw a MP3 formated version out there too, because the WAV file was giving zshare a hardtime.

    Peace

    http://www.zshare.net/download/14962092fc9ab02e/

    “Now-a-days all I see is zombies and slaves, coons Mantan‘in for pay, like our ancestors didn’t take part in slave trade. I ain’t say ‘in Hip Hop is solely to blame, but we used to have an element of truth, guess corporate dollars made change. We endorse liquid crack, degrade our women for the world as proof, like “Keep ‘in it Real…” is the absolute truth, on the PTA in private, but a killer in the booth, what’s worse, these are the values that we instill in our youth. Instead of fight ‘in the good fight, we’d rather fight each other, and fell in love with a garden tool name for sistas and mothers. And I ain’t against have ‘in fun, but lets restore the balance; so for every song about the club, we need 2 stopp’in the violence. So if you’re, hear’in this verse by Nato Caliph, your either nod ‘in in agreement, or grit ‘in your teeth. The Revolution is upon us, though normally I’m Peace, St. Louis with NYOIL set ‘in our Culture Free…”

    move…

  132. NYOIL Says:

    BigGunn – Fam I really like what you did with that verse.. I dug how you keep it positive .. not as angry as my shit sounds.. more of a build.. from a person living the cultures perspective.. I dug that. And the cadence was strong.. and you were right on time..

    Nato… u got an illy voice.. and I liked your lyrics a lot on that joint.. sound powerful all around. Sounds like you were a bit rushed too.. didn’t get a chance to sit with it like you wanted to .. but i can hear thru that .. (trust me i know how that is) Shit is sharp my dude

    Yo on the honest.. yall know i aint judging.. that’s on yall.. and the other posters here. I’m just giving my opinion and letting yall know that I care enough to listen.. see who might end up on my next album.. that shit is going to be a classic.. so whoever get on it.. gotta be NICE.. cause i’ma put yo’ ass to work!!! it aint gonna be some ole bullshit track with you just saying some quick verse and that’s that.. fuck that.. we gonna go in.. I’m tryna see you shine on that shit.. make cats look for yo ass after they hear that joint!!

    Also.. I am hearing some talent out here fam.. I know my politics and position on a few issues may not go down well with a few of yall.. but that shouldn’t stand in the way of what we share.. which is this love of the music.. I hope yall brothers keep pushing and making a name for yourself.. cause I aint heard NO Wack shit yet.. I hope my grind can be an example for yall as to how to get where u wanna go.. do it your way..but do it fam!!

    good luck to us all.

  133. NYOIL Says:

    advakit.. good shit .. I understand your misgivings.. but you still put it down.. strong build.

    Nanyanen.. And the Winner Is…
    What a waste of time. Nanyanen.. you actually had something there .. despite that pointless run you did in the beginning.. I guess that was to establish some sort of flow .. a lot of words for the sake of words.. no real cohesion. But still in all there was a lot of talent wasted tryna shit on me.

    which was some real no where shit. Only thing about that that bothered me..is that you sounded like you really thought u said something deep. You had 16 and did a bunch of senseless wordplay and said a bunch of nothing.. but some cheap shot.

    Not for nothing… I find it a little odd how cats can cosign for years muphukkas getting on tracks talking about pimping the black women. Killing for colors, Killing for drugs.. selling drugs, gang violence, drug usage, and material gain over any sense of community loyalty or morality..
    but all the sudden you got a moral quandary because I said the bastards that perpetuate this shit in MY community should get punished.. Lynched for that matter.
    Shit sounds awful pussy to me to be frank.

    If the shit troubles you that much homie.. then stay the fuck out of it. Or wait till Jeezy do his contest and spit your shit over that.. or do a cameo verse on Nas’ Be a nigger too track. but don’t beat me in the head homie..

    you obviously aint a parent .. getting your fucking heart broke watching your kids friends sink and slip into the cracks .. and you tryna be a community father to your hood cause there are so few.. and no matter what you say or do.. u can’t reach these kids.. cause some fucking clown with a fucking diamond chain on and 30 inch rims is on tv making that bullshit look good. And this real shit u telling these kids just sound like a fucking drag.

    So just stick to that bullshit you spitting about a whole lot of nothing.. a bunch of fucking words with no thought.. no point other than them shits sound slick together. Some shit that no one will remember or care about after you said it.

    I’ll do what i do.. and see where that takes me.

  134. Tha Advakit Says:

    Yo…I jus got positive feedback from NYOIL! I appreciate you taking the time to listen to my track and providing feedback. Very much appreciated!!!!!!!!!!! Hopefully I get the opportunity to get in the booth with you

  135. Nanyanen Says:

    @ NYOIL

    http://www.tinyurl.com/yvobsj

    But, seriously… no need to menstruate over my verse, fam.

    I took that route just to stand out amongst the competition. I don’t got any hatred for you or your hustle, or the message that you are trying to convey. However, your response is comedy to me. You read too far into it.
    One love and godspeed.

  136. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    HERE GOES THE LINK AGAIN IF YALL HAVNT CHECKD IT. GIVE ME SOME FEEDBACK IF YALL WOULD LIKE TO. HOPE YALL ENJOY. CHUCHHH
    http://www.zshare.net/download/148367125cbdcd16/

  137. b-ease Says:

    I will have my verse no later than Saturday, is that still within the deadline?

  138. Laws Says:

    ill have my verse up by 6 pm. hope i make the deadline

  139. StephenKING Says:

    Uptown u should up ya song to were u dont have to download it to listen
    i think thats the problem

  140. BigGunn Says:

    Thanks for the props NYOIL! That means a lot weather I win or not. If you don’t mind I’d like to be able to use that as a quote in my blogs and such. Let me know if your cool with that.

    Also, I’m a lil concerned about the state of the contest it’s self, considering we still don’t know when the deadline is, and I’ think I’ve only seen one fan response so far. What happens if only one fan posts, or if only people who submit post…each would vote for thier own shit I imagine. And for those who spit more than 16, are they being judged on there best 16 or the whole song? These are just some things I’m, and maybe others are, curious about.

    —-> Nanyanen, I’m just curious to know what was the point of dissin’ NYOIL in this contest? Were you actually entering the contest, or just dissin for attention or what?You said you don’t have hatred for him or his hustle, and that you wrote that to stand out among the competition. But why diss someone if you don’t hate them? And how the hell does dissin’ the man whose album you’d be on look good on your end, especially when you contradict your vrs with your response. If your real intent was to stand out and try to win, your efforts should have been put towards writing some really dope shit, as well as making sure the delivery is on point. THAT would make you stand out…IMO.

    I’m not asking these questions to try to start any beef, It just doesn’t make sense to me so I thought I’d ask.

    —-> And the Winner Is… It seems to me altho you disagree with NYOIL’S use of lynching, which is totally fine, you went about it in a better way than Nanyanen. That short intro vrs, while aimed at oil, seems to be more of you just expressing a difference of opinion. From your posts it seems the same way, which is cool. Also, your main vrs did just what the contest asked for, and that makes me wonder…is this a serious submission for the contest?

    I only ask that because I can’t tell if you are more interested in entering the contest or expressing your difference of opinion?

    —-> Tha_Advakit – Nice voice, nice flow. If tightened up just a bit I think you’d be killer. Keep doin it man.

    —-> Nato – you got a nice flow and voice presence. Good lyrics are well man.

    —-> Uptown – Same deal bra, nice flow and voice presence. Good lyrics

    —-> StephenKING – Sounds like you got a lot to say bro, some good lyrics man. I can see that it is a bit rushed, but if tightened up it would be nice.

    —-> Relyk 5000 – It sounds like there were a few times where the beats skips. It’s a bit distracting. I see you have a lot to say as well, but it sounded more like a freestyle than something you took our time with. I would suggest taking those vrs and cutting them into one really good vrs. Learn it well and re spit it.

    —-> spirit equality – It sounds like you got some good lyrics, but I can hardly hear the beat, so I don’t really know how you sound…or flow over it. I think it’s cool you choose to do the video format, but I think it’s working against you at the moment. If you can, re spit that over just the audio. Also, it looks like you were reading off what you prob just wrote. If that is the case you might want to try to memorize your vrs first and then spit it. You’ll sound a lot more confident on it for sure.

    I think I commented on everyones joints so far, and I hope no one takes offense. I’d appreciate feedback from any of you, as long as it’s not dissin’ just to be dissin’.

    Wes

  141. Megatronic Says:

    “Learn to live together as brothers or perish as fools.” That’s hot StephenKing. You have my vote.

  142. Master 3 Says:

    What up y’all,

    Heres my verse for this:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/150754632eb49d5f/

    Lemme know what you think.

    Peace

  143. Laws Says:

    LAWS submission for the NY OIL remix

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/1508098685216e40/

  144. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    NO DOUBT STEPHEN. IF YOU COULD TELL ME HOW IT BE MUCH APPRECIATED. I JUSS PASTED THE LINK ZSHARE GAVE ME. MUCH LOVE. CHUCHHHH

  145. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    NO DOUBT STEPHEN. IF YOU COULD TELL ME HOW IT BE MUCH APPRECIATED. I JUSS PASTED THE LINK ZSHARE GAVE ME. MUCH LOVE. CHUCHHHH

  146. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    NO DOUBT STEPHEN. IF YOU COULD TELL ME HOW IT BE MUCH APPRECIATED. I JUSS PASTED THE LINK ZSHARE GAVE ME. MUCH LOVE. CHUCHHHH

  147. Laws Says:

    LAWS submission for the NY OIL remix

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/1508098685216e40/

    sup…i saw that my comment was “awaiting moderation”, and somebody just posted something after me.

    sorry for the repost

  148. Nato Caliph Says:

    I reallly appreciate the feed back, I can always write another verse or re-record my verse. Let me know, I’m cool either way. Thanks again for the opportunity.

    Peace God,

    move….

    “Cipher Inside” in stores now…

  149. Laws Says:

    am i bugging? or..are both my zshare posts awaiting moderation.

    i think im bugging…or a retard..or both

  150. Laws Says:

    LAWS submission for the NY OIL remix

    http:// www. zshare. net/audio/1508098685216e40/

    yea…im an idiot..didnt read the above posts. sorry for the posting mess eskay

  151. StephenKING Says:

    Laws when u post your zshare link take off the “http”

  152. Laws Says:

    LAWS submission for the NY OIL remix

    www. zshare. net/audio/1508098685216e40/

    stephen..thx man, much apppreciated

  153. Laws Says:

    LAWS submission for the NY OIL remix

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/1508098685216e40/

    wow..ive officially made 5 billion incorrect posts

  154. Tha Advakit Says:

    BIG GUNN, i appreciate the feedback. That’s how feedback is supposed to go. Very good constructive criticism and you weren’t rude, much love!

  155. Master 3 Says:

    What up y’all,

    Heres my verse for this:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/150754632eb49d5f/

    Lemme know what you think.

    Peace

  156. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    AIGHT THIS SHOULD BE MY LINK SO YOU DONT HAVE TO DL IT. CHUCHHH
    http://zshare.net/audio/148367125cbdcd16/

  157. StephenKING Says:

    Yo Laws
    i liked your verse
    i like when rappers talk to u
    and that shit really spoke to me

    man i say NYOIL should just let all of us on the track like on some back to back shit lol

  158. StephenKING Says:

    i mean foreal cuz everybody dope in they own way
    everybody has there own style and i really couldnt pick one person out of everybody

  159. Tha Advakit Says:

    Yeah, real talk STEPHEN KING. They might as well just let NYOIL pick the person though, because it’s hard to choose one and no one has really voted…

  160. Laws Says:

    thanks stephen. much appreciated. i owe you for the zshare tip, haha.

  161. spirit equality Says:

    i was definitely reading off the paper, didn’t you see my eyes off screen? haha. i was reading off the pad, the beat was playing thru my laptop speakers and the video was recording by the camera in my laptop.

    personally, i don’t even care if i win, i just wanted to register my dissent about the whole concept of saying that rappers should be lynched. black people, how will we advance is we don’t value ourselves, including black people we disagree with?

  162. StephenKING Says:

    since everybody is tuned in
    i mine as well showcase

    StephenKING- I Goes Off
    http://www.zshare.net/audio/151269345f767d63/

  163. BigGunn Says:

    Thanks Advakit.

    spirit equality – I feel you man. I still think if we could hear the beat better your vrs would have a harder impact. Or even if it had no beat at all, only cuz the little of it you hear is distracting.

    Laws – Nice flow and lyrics man. Good work.

    I see the deadline for this contest has been posted, thanks! Cat’s still got a few weeks, so we may see many more entries yet…

  164. BigGunn Says:

    spirit equality – And yes, we should be able to disagree with each other without without fear of being killed for your opinion. At least back in the day you got stomped at worse… There are plenty of mc’s whose music I can’t stand, but i respect their hustle and I don’t hate them as people. But If I were to even mention that directly to any of them, they wouldn’t hear all of what I said, only that “I don’t like their sound”, and in an effort to be tough and uphold there name, guns are drawn… I’ve seen it happen too many times…

    It’s like you HAVE to like every mc out there these days…and that’s bullshit! I’ve met plenty of other musicians in other genres who don’t take things so personally, especially critiques. But then again, there are just as many of us who don’t know how to critique, and think that dissin’ someone qualifies for that. “Your shit is whack” is not a critique, but people prefer that than something like ” your style isn’t my thing”, which isn’t a critique, but is still less offensive then the first statement. And nobody likes to be offended, I don’t care who you are.

    People are gonna have to change their mind set before any kinda real advancements can be made. We could talk about this all day but it always seems like it falls on def ears…

  165. And The Winner Is... Says:

    I write alot…I write for myself and others…if you can’t reconize talent and real feelings, than this competition isnt doing what its suppose to or at least what you wanted it too…for everyone else my verse was not directed at NYOIL at all…why would I get on a beat to diss the other person on the hook…no matter how bad i think the hook is…the fact that i got on the song should mean more than my orginal thought and response…this comp wasnt about just the song at all, but rather how you approached it and how you worked on it… In fact I still had space for a third verse…so who knows…maybe i will finish what I started, seeing how NYOIL has put a little fire under me…now I feel like pulling out the pen and the pad…

    Props to BigGunn for listening to everyones submission…you are actually one of the only person here I think cares at all…

    NYOIL can we get just the beat without the hook on it..see what we can do with it without being boxed in…

  166. Laws Says:

    gunn, much appreciated

  167. BigGunn Says:

    Laws, no doubt man. BTW, I checked out your myspace…that joint “Come Back” is hot! You got skills – no doubt about it man. Keep up the hustle.

    And The Winner Is…, Thanks man.

  168. pockets Says:

    my vote is for Laws

  169. StephenKING Says:

    whats the address to Law’s myspace
    i wanna here his joints

    mine is http://www.myspace.com/milez704

  170. BigGunn Says:

    For anyone whos name is highlighted in blue, you can click on it and it will take you to whatever site they entered. Laws goes to his myspace, mine to my portfolio. The songs on my myspace page are super old, so if you listen keep that in mind, lol.

    http://www.myspace.com/biggbiggbiggbigg

  171. Laws Says:

    I emdedded it in my name.

    http://www.myspace.com/lawshiphop

    i appreciate the love yall

  172. matty burns! Says:

    gotta vote for wesley gunn! hollah! (i’m white)

  173. StephenKING Says:

    yeah laws u got some dope songs on ya page

    I dont know who i would pick as the best verse in the contest though

    If i had to pick one i would pick myself ofcourse lol
    but if not myself i would pick either BigGunn or Nato

  174. StephenKING Says:

    no i take that back cuz i like advakit and Laws too
    damn everybody has different styles its hard to choose

  175. Nanyanen Says:

    BigGunn Says:

    July 10th, 2008 at 4:19 pm

    —-> Nanyanen, I’m just curious to know what was the point of dissin’ NYOIL in this contest? Were you actually entering the contest, or just dissin for attention or what?You said you don’t have hatred for him or his hustle, and that you wrote that to stand out among the competition. But why diss someone if you don’t hate them? And how the hell does dissin’ the man whose album you’d be on look good on your end, especially when you contradict your vrs with your response. If your real intent was to stand out and try to win, your efforts should have been put towards writing some really dope shit, as well as making sure the delivery is on point. THAT would make you stand out…IMO.

    I’m not asking these questions to try to start any beef, It just doesn’t make sense to me so I thought I’d ask.

    ^^^
    You are way off, money. The reason I posted that verse should be obvious (and it is not to win anything). It’s the same reason you posted yours. It’s the same reason everyone else posted theirs. It’s the reason why NYOIL started this contest. It’s why we even go to nahright in the first place.

    It’s HIP-HOP. My verse is hip-hop. And everyone’s ability to have and state an opinion about it is, too. So, critique all you want. Just remember, being constructive isnt always the only way to build.

  176. Tha Advakit Says:

    I refuse to make one selection, everybody’s shit is just TOOO good. Check mine out if you all haven’t already!

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14903476abd50654/

  177. BigGunn Says:

    Nanyanen Says:
    July 13th, 2008 at 2:35 am

    You are way off, money. The reason I posted that verse should be obvious (and it is not to win anything). It’s the same reason you posted yours. It’s the same reason everyone else posted theirs. It’s the reason why NYOIL started this contest. It’s why we even go to nahright in the first place.

    It’s HIP-HOP. My verse is hip-hop. And everyone’s ability to have and state an opinion about it is, too. So, critique all you want. Just remember, being constructive isnt always the only way to build.

    ^^^
    Thanks for clearing that up. There is nothing wrong with you, or anyone else for that matter, stating an opinion. Nah right and NYOIL did ask for our opinions, which is exactly what you gave, and so did everyone else, but that’s as far as the similarities go. If I’d known that was your soul purpose I would not have attempted to critique your work, because as you said it’s not an entry. It wasn’t put together to be part of the competition, and I’m only critiquing those works that were put up looking for feedback, weather from NYOIL or anyone else.

    As for your last sentence I’m not sure what you mean by it. You don’t have to explain it if you don’t want to, I just don’t know any other ways to build…

  178. nation Says:

    took a minute, but I just moderated the last few comments from: Master 3; Laws; UPTOWNSWUITE; BigGunn; matty burns!

  179. BigGunn Says:

    Master 3 – nice submission man. Tight lyrics and a very controlled sound. That’s what’s up.

    Matty Burns – Thanks man.

  180. chea Says:

    i vote for laws, not only because his verses are ill but also because it will mean a white dude will rap in a video for a song about lynching blacks

  181. pockets Says:

    LMAO chea

  182. Laws Says:

    hahahah…im brazillian actually.

    in the song i said “i aint even half black”.

    but..chea!!!!

  183. realestate Says:

    ADVAKIT had the best verse HANDS DOWN!

  184. duyukid Says:

    how you gonna talk slick, to n.y. oil?

    (c) me

  185. C.A.S.H. Says:

    here goes my version, check me out:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/15515389fba5d568/

    http://www.myspace.com/cashmakessense

    cashmakessense@gmail.com

  186. C.A.S.H. Says:

    here goes my version, check me out:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/15515389fba5d568/

    http://www.myspace.com/cashmakessense

    cashmakessense@gmail.com

  187. Tru Gwap Fa Sure Says:

    big ups…couple of hot verses in here..

  188. green eyes Says:

    Just to make sure I’m listening to everyones verse and not missing anyone, I got:
    Big Gunn
    Master 3
    Stephen King
    Relyk 5000
    Nanyanen
    Uptown Swuite
    Laws
    Amd the Winner Is
    the advakit
    Nato

    anyone missing?

  189. C.A.S.H. Says:

    my shit bruh!

  190. green eyes Says:

    a few thoughts..

    Spirit Equality- not bad, didnt sound quit tight on the beat, maybe that was due more to the recording being played in the background though. The verse and your delivery seemed a bit rushed. reading off appear is cool, but it felt almost like you were seeing it for the first time

    The Advakit- love your voice, distinctive sound, you obviously know what you are doing, would like to hear more from you. tight verse, seemed a but like you could work on some breathing techniques to control, your breath and spit a little better, but really nice work

    And the Winner Is- nice relaxed flow

    Bigg Gunn- Tight verse, good added production elements to the track

    Laws- decent flow, you had some nice metaphors in there

    Master3- clean voice

    Nanyanen- lol @ you beefing. odd angle to go for, but hey do you, would like to hear you over a different beat, this one didnt quite fit your voice & delivery style

    Nato Caliph- ill all the way around, great voice, reminded me a but of big rube, content & metaphors totally onpoint and clever at that. a good look all around

    Relyk 5000- nice effort, but it seems you could use a bot more oractice in the booth tightening up verses and learning beats and how to make everything all fit together. You had alot today and were damn sure going to say it all.. even if the words didnt all fit. you seemed to say “suck my dick” alot, nothing wring with that, but when you close out every verse with it, it loses impact. you seem young, but hungry so keep going or it

    Stephen King- verse felt a bit rushed, liked that other track (the rock sounding one) better

    Uptown Swuite- real nice natural flow, good cadance and delivery, last verse felt rushed

    My vote goes to Nato Caliph. The Advakit & and The Winner Is round out my top three

  191. Tha Advakit Says:

    Appreciate the feedback ‘Green eyes.’ I feel you on the breath control, I’m still working on that. Check out my myspace…www.myspace.com/ecadvakit

  192. C.A.S.H. Says:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/157144095439899c/

  193. O BLicky Bama Says:

    come on now

  194. Jamie J. Says:

    is it just me, or is the instrumental, not really an ‘instrumental’?

  195. Jamie J. Says:

    is it just me, or is the instrumental, not really an ‘instrumental’?

  196. BigGunn Says:

    C.A.S.H – Where is your entry? If you’ve posted before I’ve never seen it.

    Green Eyes – Thanks.

    Jamie J – The beat still has the hook and some bg vocals.

    O Blicky Bama – What?

  197. STIX Says:

    BigGunn – MAD PROPS! I VOTE YOU!

  198. C.A.S.H. Says:

    Big Gunn, for whatever reason, eskay or whoever runs the comments didn’t accept my post, but go to my myspace

    myspace.com/cashmakessense

  199. C.A.S.H. Says:

    my bad, acutally it says “Your comment is awaiting moderation”, i don’t know what that means…or how to get it accepted

  200. C.A.S.H. Says:

    actually*

    but here is the link again, maybe it will go through

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/157144095439899c/

  201. BigGunn Says:

    C.A.S.H – yeam an, there have been a lot of posts awaiting moderation. I’m sure there are still some like that…which sucks. Glad I got to hear it tho. Nice flow man. There was a word or two I couldn’t make out, but other than that no complaints. Nice job.

  202. C.A.S.H. Says:

    i can dig it….i appreciate you checkin tha joint out bruh…i’m not sure how it’s judged, but it looks like i got a post in, if you trying, what worked for me was taking off the “http” part of the link.

  203. digital scales Says:

    whats good people…

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/15780203662f28a8/

    Woodro feat NYOil

  204. BigGunn Says:

    digital scales – Tight flow, nice voice. Smooth man. Good work.

  205. MDP Says:

    Yo, I’m MDP.

    Here’s my 16:
    http://www.zshare.net/audio/15841838835e4101/

    In case you can’t hear the lyrics:
    Hip-Hop will never die, but it can still get worse
    Polluted by MCs with little or no worth
    Labels treat us like slaves, take the music we own
    And try to profit from singles, videos & ringtones
    Nowadays, our lyrics have nothing to say
    They were crafted for major networks and radio play
    Sexism, ignorance, talking down to the race
    When we’re the reason you have a career in the first place
    How can we fix it? We have to change our ways
    Do the music ourselves, and throw the labels away
    Take advice, and show love to other MCs
    Like Chuck D, KRS-One & Public Enemy
    Stop beefin’ and killin’ over what’s said in a rhyme
    Kill the CD, and sell all the music online
    Eliminate the middlemen, make the profit ourselves
    So every MC can have a taste of freedom and wealth.

    Conflict. Resolution. 16 bars.

    The choice is yours.

    (P.S. The beginning is just my intro describing why you should choose me.)

  206. digital scales Says:

    Good looks Gunn

    So hows all the voting being done Eskay?

    you gon set up a post?

  207. Wise Says:

    I haven’t seen anyone do a video yet, so I decided to check in and do one.

    http://www.zshare.net/video/1584989138afae25/

    Lyrics will come as soon as I return from dinner.

  208. Tony Nova Says:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/158541810081f756/

    Tony Nova feat. NYOIL

    holla

  209. Tony Nova Says:

    and props to digital scales…i was feeling ya verse…

  210. Wise Says:

    And so it seems, hip-hop’s lagging/
    record sales is down, rappers turning to acting/
    if you ain’t making a track to make a girl booty clap/
    or gotta dance, ya chance’s slim like the nose on mike jackson/
    I’m think, i should kidnap hip-hop and hold it for ransom/
    but ain’t nobody even gonna pay it/
    they’d just embed the video code into their myspace page/
    forward it ’round for other people to play it
    say it’s not so, rap can’t be broke/
    I just saw ROSS burn money on an eskay post (http://nahright.com/2008/05/01/video-rick-ross-has-money-to-burn/)
    jay-z just gotta deal for a hundred and fifty mill/
    so when can we expect him to drop somebody dope/
    maybe I’m tripping/maybe I should follow the trend and stop spittin’
    make a lean rock, snap track, call it “Kickin”
    OR maybe YOU as good music lovers should put ya foot down
    and ask for better stuff to listen to (HUH)
    That’s me venting/me wishin’ radio and record execs would think TWICE about whats given to the public
    It seems like they put out whatever and say fuck it/
    radio plays it enough and then you love it
    then they make a remix to the shit Sean Puff it
    then us real rappers gotta bear the nasty grunt of it
    like we get blamed for the negative/
    but anything positive, we don’t get no credit for it
    like we told your daughter start strippin’
    gave your son the handbook and told him to start dealin’
    I promise you/if the Lord wouldn’t of blessed me with this talent 10 fold
    I wouldn’t even think twice about spittin’
    Although I’m guilty of doing the same thing
    At the same time, I spit flames, knowledge and game
    If you’re siffing through my lyrics tryna figure my name
    the name is Wise/now DON’T you forget it again

    I apologize for going over 16 bars, but I HAD to go in on it. I had some stuff on my chest.

  211. khz Says:

    YOUNG WISE ALL DAY!!

  212. Nano New Religion Says:

    Word- digital scales, hard lyrics, tight flow , list them corny parasite no knowledge of self so called rappers.

  213. Wise Says:

    I haven’t seen anyone do a video yet, so I decided to check in and do one.

    http://www.zshare.net/video/1584989138afae25/

    And so it seems, hip-hop’s lagging/
    record sales is down, rappers turning to acting/
    if you ain’t making a track to make a girl booty clap/
    or gotta dance, ya chance’s slim like the nose on mike jackson/
    I’m think, i should kidnap hip-hop and hold it for ransom/
    but ain’t nobody even gonna pay it/
    they’d just embed the video code into their myspace page/
    forward it ’round for other people to play it
    say it’s not so, rap can’t be broke/
    I just saw ROSS burn money on an eskay post (http://nahright.com/2008/05/01/video-rick-ross-has-money-to-burn/)
    jay-z just gotta deal for a hundred and fifty mill/
    so when can we expect him to drop somebody dope/
    maybe I’m tripping/maybe I should follow the trend and stop spittin’
    make a lean rock, snap track, call it “Kickin”
    OR maybe YOU as good music lovers should put ya foot down
    and ask for better stuff to listen to (HUH)
    That’s me venting/me wishin’ radio and record execs would think TWICE about whats given to the public
    It seems like they put out whatever and say fuck it/
    radio plays it enough and then you love it
    then they make a remix to the shit Sean Puff it
    then us real rappers gotta bear the nasty grunt of it
    like we get blamed for the negative/
    but anything positive, we don’t get no credit for it
    like we told your daughter start strippin’
    gave your son the handbook and told him to start dealin’
    I promise you/if the Lord wouldn’t of blessed me with this talent 10 fold
    I wouldn’t even think twice about spittin’
    Although I’m guilty of doing the same thing
    At the same time, I spit flames, knowledge and game
    If you’re siffing through my lyrics tryna figure my name
    the name is Wise/now DON’T you forget it again

    I apologize for going over 16 bars, but I HAD to go in on it. I had some stuff on my chest.

  214. Wise Says:

    Is there any reason why my post is awaiting moderation?

  215. b-ease Says:

    Anybody know how to move a ProTools session to I-Tunes and/or z-share? Thanks in advance.

  216. Tony Nova Says:

    i coulda swore i posted this already but whatever..lol

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/158541810081f756/

    Tony Nova feat. NYOIL

    holla

  217. Tony Nova Says:

    of course it pops up after i post it again…smh.. my bad y’all

  218. digital scales Says:

    b-ease

    you first have to save the session to your computer

    save it as an mp3

    after that you can upload it to itunes/zshare

  219. b-ease Says:

    good look digi

    @ es, i’ll have my song up by midnite.

  220. BigGunn Says:

    Wise – I’m gotta say that was nice man. I’m glad I could hear the beat as you spit. You did have a lot to say and I was feelin’ it. A few words either I just missed or got slurred, but it could just be me on that one. Nice work.

    Tony Nova – Nice flow man, I can see you had a lot to say as well. My only problem had to do with the fact I can only hear you out the left side of my headphones. Other than that nice work man.

    Wes

  221. MDP Says:

    My entry didn’t go through yesterday, so here it is again:

    MDP: Ya’ll Should All Get Lynched (Remix) (w/NYOIL)
    http://www.zshare.net/audio/15841838835e4101/

    Will post lyrics if wanted.

    New Music Cartel 4 Life

  222. TJizzle Says:

    All I gotta say my dude Wise killed it.

  223. RIGZ Says:

    Fresh out the booth (I’m still in there), no mix, no nothing…but I made the deadline….I think

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/15907333abb2bba5/

  224. RIGZ Says:

    IF CANT DECIPHER THE ACCENT:

    Yes I-gher, ever Ighly
    Fire the shepeard that leads the sheep blindly
    Step around heavy subjects and speak lightly
    Smile with the enemy and creep politely
    What once was Zulu – now he is Toby
    History got reduced to redundance, now the customer is on a everlasting search & hunger for substance = Wile. E Coyote

    *****************

    In your verse you never sing to the Lord
    But you say His name first when you win an award
    Chat alot of breeze, just to begin the applause
    But believe in a war they’re never swingin a sword
    Reptillian spawn, cold-heart, spitting fables
    Minus the moral insight, it isnt stable
    What’s even worse is exuses they gave you
    About, “If that aint the script, there’s no flick”
    So, I’m prepared to hang man from the clouds,
    Suspended in the air by the wings of an angel
    Willing and able to put your will on the table
    For succumbing to Willie Lynch and the will of the labels, little muppets….

  225. digital scales Says:

    RIGGA RIGGA

  226. nation Says:

    I just moderated comments from:

    C.A.S.H., Tru Gwap Fa Sure, Big Gunn, MDP, Wise, Tony Nova, khz, Tjizzle

  227. Charles Oakley Says:

    Yeah, Rigz killed it….

  228. Jakk Crakker Says:

    Fukk a Sickteen an sum audio I’m gonna rite mah shit. I awl readee da winner. Crown me keeng

    Hoo wanna baddel?/ rather shuld I say hoo wanna git linched?/got dat lumber jakk hat, dey cawl me da grinch/sinding crakkers to rap, niggers git own da bench/ 22’s to ya mouth, nigger git on da fence/ Cawl jimmy and sammy, we bout to get rich/ taking dimonds and chanes like lilo and stitch/ we making dimonds and chains to put on yer bitch/ floss wit mah nutz out, nut on yer bitch/ Cuz I’m da cook crakka/rhymes be matta facta/git mad head like xfacta/ git it xfacta (nigger got a big ol head/ back to beat/send niggers in da heat/ to cook up sum meat/pork chops and hawg, dats awl I wanna eat/ give niggers a ball/but dey aint got no arm/whip it reel hard dey cawl me Mr. crakk favre/ Improovment to be maid?/ nigger get in da shade/give me a cup and make sum koolaid.

    Dees rhymes is hot niggers. Yu knowed I dun awlready wun dun dun dun….

    Dey call me dun crakkkkk…….Cuz I done crakked em all (wid a whip)….Lafffing my azz awf.

  229. Lanna Jouja Says:

    Wow Jakk that was really interesting how you flipped the inner existentialism of the verse inside and out to reflect how the outskirters are heeding hip-hop. Good stuff man. Jakk yu are amazing. Peachy. oops I mean you.

  230. yaboy Says:

    DAMN, shit is hot so far…

    feeling verses of

    big gunn, rigga, digital, laws, and nato…

  231. Boosie Says:

    Here’s my opinion (It matters the most)

    This Kardi kid is a problem…..He has more talent than anyone here…..Being that he is new school and able to rock a fresh beat that mirrors the party days, which is now the in thing…..But Nigga you sound like a nigga who pops red bubblegum in class and eat lunchables…put some bass in your voice, and get in a fight or two at school you kind of timid.

    Advakit…my nigga who are you I-20?….nigga you sound like you was rapping like it was 1989…rhyming like run dmc and kool moe dee and shit….But you was aight with that deep ass voice….you had some aight lyrics.

    Nanyanen…You sounded like a gay eminem but the verse was hot and corny at the same time….Seems like you sneak off to the wigger hood park to kick freestyles.

    Rigz was aight….his voice just aint grew on me yet, can hardly hear what the nigga is saying….some of the other songs I like, but this one was okay.

    Digital scales……at first I thought you was Nyoil and had to rewind it a few times..but then I found out you was that other nigga…..Yours was aight….it sounded a lil zombiesh meaning it sounded like a hook verse. not bad though.

    nato caliph….a fake ass wanna be saul williams/ masta killa…….were you rapping or talking?….you had a nice voice and obviously some expensive equipment….Not bad you was pretty good though

    Stephen king….Um what are you angry or something? you sound like em when his wife sucked another’s man dick…..also you sound like a fake ass hipster….but I did like the little parts where the words were emphasized with a loud beat….your raps need to be more succint and pause more…this typical run-on ny style is dead….the song and beat wasnt bad….You was aight….I prolly just wanna hear the girl sing though…

    And the winners is…..you was aight….it sounded a lil dr. seussish….pausing at every iambic pentatmeter line…other than that it was aight….You saying krs one is a hipster?….well hipsters are herbs…

    More reviews after the jump

  232. Boosie Says:

    Uptown…..what are you a fake ass royce da 5’9?…..You was the best one out of these so called conscious backpack rapper militants……You had the best swag out of all these cats…

  233. Boosie Says:

    I’m sorry but Nobody is rapping better than NYOIL dude when I hear this get lynched song….I’m instantly going back to the wu-days and stomping out niggas with they timbs….

    He sound like a young nas/raekwon with the swag as far as the flow the energy and the crispness behind it….Yes the nigga had mad swag and I mean SWAG…the way he hopped on the track and just ransacked it like it was his…..Like when I listen to NYOIL’s part I can dance or nod my head or just ponder all at the same time….that energy and style just can’t be replicated..

  234. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    NAH HOMIE ACTUALLY I DONT EVEN LISTEN TO ROYCE MUCH. MY FAVORITE CREW IS THE GOODIE MOB HAHA. MUCH LOVE ON THE COMPLIEMENT THOUGH HOMIE. NAH IM A JUST A STRATE UP WEST COAST KAT YA DIGG ON MY SHIT. KHAKID UP AND ALL THAT GOOD ISH. YOU JUSS GOTTA COME REAL WITH IT YA FEEL. A LOT OF KATS GET STUCK IN A SPOT WHERE THEY TRY TO HARD TO HOLD UP THIS IMAGE THEY GOT OF WHAT THEY THINK HIP HOP IS SUPPOSED TO BE AND THE SHIT COMES OFF AS MAD CORNY (NOT DIRECTLY DISSIN ANYBODY, JUSTY STATING MY THOUGHTS IN GENERAL). HIP HOP IS YOU YOURSELF AS AN INDIVIDUAL I THINK. IM A STRATE WEST COAST KAT TO THE DEATH OF YOU LISTEN TO ME. IM A STREET KAT BUT I LOVE HIP HOP TOO. KATS IN GENERAL JUST NEED TO NOT TRY SO HARD. BE YOURSELVES. I DONT KNOW IF THAT COMMENT ABOUT BEING A FAKE ASS ROYCE THE 5’9 WAS A SHOT AT ME THOUGH BUT ITS ALL LOVE. I DONT SOUND ANYTHING LIKE HIM I THINK AND I DONT EVEN LISTEN TO THE KAT MUCH.

  235. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    ALSO IM ACTUALLY AN EX GANG MEMBER HOMIE IF YOU THOUGHT I WAS A FAKE BACKPACK MILITANT OR IF THATS WHAT YOUR OPINION WAS OF ME

  236. green eyes Says:

    RIGZ– loved the verses

    MDP- ageism is a bitch bt it exists, but for a 14 y.o., you’re holfding it down, if there were more of yous amd less soujah boys id be less depressed about the future

    C.A.S.H.- i liked how you flipped it and drooped your verse like a convo

    digital scales- you got a real nice laid back flow and nice melodic tones to your voice, nice verses, 1st one was a bit stronger but that just my opinion

    wise- lol, you got skills pa, but i would have liked to see you break it into two distinctive verses, you obviously had enough to say to do ut. you got good nice presence as well

    tony nova- your verses were different, but your delivery didnt jump out at me

    on the real- mad respect to those of you who dropped a verse or two.

  237. Tha Advakit Says:

    LOL@this boosie kid. I’ll take that as compliment, seeing as how hip hop was at its peak during that time. For anybody who hasn’t heard my verse, check it out!

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/14903476abd50654/

  238. arait Says:

    And the clear winner is…that nicca that looped that shit for 32-bars…LIVE in ONE TAKE……WISE.

  239. digital scales Says:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/15780203662f28a8/

  240. C.A.S.H. Says:

    I appreciate the support, here it goes again if you ain’t heard:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/157144095439899c/

    and check the myspace:

    http://www.myspace.com/cashmakessense

    C.A.S.H. = Clif A Straight Hustla
    Check out my song “Hustlas” to get an introduction to what i’m about.

  241. MDP Says:

    Thanks, green eyes. You’re right about ageism, and I hope it doesn’t affect anyone’s decision in a negative light. To all the readers: I need all the support Ican get. Your vote counts, and I am open to any constructive criticism. Thanks for holding it down. You decide the winner.

  242. and the winner is... Says:

    green eyes Says:
    And the Winner Is- nice relaxed flow
    My vote goes to Nato Caliph. The Advakit & and The Winner Is round out my top three
    _________________
    shout out to green eyes for takin the time to listen to everyone…
    and good lookin too on puttin me in top three…

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Boosie Says:
    And the winners is…..you was aight….it sounded a lil dr. seussish….pausing at every iambic pentatmeter line…other than that it was aight….You saying krs one is a hipster?….well hipsters are herbs…
    ______________________________
    Boosie is too funny…. I was’nt calling KRS a hipster…just asking a question…who knows? maybe I’ll make a contest with a song called…”WHAT A HIPSTER LOOK LIKE?” and yes! hipsters are herbs…but funny ass comment either way..good lookin boosie… Let me get back on my shakespeare steez…
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Final Thought:
    For one I would like to say I have never entered a contest like this….I only just relized that getting feedback from other commenters was as much as I was really gonna get out of it…. So thank you to anyone who took time to listen…

    The only thing I wasn’t feeling was NYOIL leaving a salty comment about Nanyanen… and putting my name in it with his kid because he thought I was gettin at him personal….Why even response to this kid that didnt take the time to say anything…I was a little confused cause he threw my name in there too..But I have never listen to hate so I’m gonna keep it moving and do what i do…but check out his comment thou…like he is trying to be a voice for the people…who is he to tell people NOT to speak up? take another listen and see where I’m coming from…cause it is where my friends are sinking into the gravel pit…but I’ve been a parent to them for years now and I’m not gonna stop now…
    -And The Winner Is….
    “Shit sounds awful pussy to me to be frank” ….im dyin

  243. BigGunn Says:

    MPD- Your entry goes to show no matter what you age is your opinion is important. I liked your stuff man. The thing I have issue with is something you’ll improve on over time, and that’s your delivery. I’m not holding it against you cuz of you age, plus I can “see through” that. Keep it up man and you just might be hip-hops future!

    Rigz – You got a nice style man, very different from what I expected. I like to be surprised like that. Good work!

    My question is when does the voting end?

  244. C.A.S.H. Says:

    yeah, how does the voting work?

  245. The Mighty Mobility Says:

    I think the remix by C.A.S.H. was dope cause he was able to voice his own opinion and not just agree with NYOIL, he actually came up with a new solution besides hanging people!

    “…lynching’s not the answer…we need a vaccine to stop the cancer”

  246. Ms. Darden Says:

    After listening to everyone’s verse(s), I have to say that Wise’s was the best one of them all.

  247. YouKnowWhatItIs Says:

    That nigga Wise killed that shit, son! It’s a wrap!

  248. The Truth Says:

    Wise should be the victor. Steady flow with the right concept.
    Check out the submission if you missed it.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-hkCSoCdhl8

  249. Boosie Says:

    More Reviews (and this is the only one you should pay attention too)

    Big Gunn- Ol Robot humpty dumpty 1991 sounding ass nigga, but that was hot….I listened to that one a few times…You killed it though that was one of the best….But that intro almost made me turn it off with that baby mama’s line…..I thought this was gonna be some herb ass shit…..But you had an original flow and got better at the end..

    Cash- When I first heard your voice I thought it was some ol mexican chingo bling ass nigga….But You prolly had the best lyrics cause it actually was opposite of NYOIL….But you need to put some bass in your voice fam, and come harder with the accents and flow…Sounding like you ate some marshmallows and shit breathing all cot damn hard on the mike….but still best lyrics and on point.

    MPD- Major mistake….don’t come on the mic telling other niggas to pick you….thats’ corny and just cuz you 14, dont mean you get a pass…Your voice is too high….you sounded like you was rapping for ice-t’s private school rap show….I guess your lyrics was alright for your age….I thought I was listening to some sesame street shit….But you wasn’t bad for fourteen….But DON”T ask and tell niggas to vote for you just rap fam.

    Tony Nova- Ol smack dvd battling ass nigga….Your first few lines was hot but your voice is just average…Kinda got that harlem flow where you pause and you leave us hanging for more….It was aight fam…at least you had an updated new york flow unlike the rest of these niggas rhyming like 15 years ago. Nice energy, a lil choppy though.

    Wise- LOL, whooo…..that was hot….especially when you said lean snap pop call it kickin….them bars was hot fam….Nigga look like a broke version of dwayne wade….The swag was all over the rhyme dog….That’s most important…All the rest of these niggas rap, but you styled up which makes the lyrics shines brighter….Definitely top 3….You sounded like you had peanut butter in your mouth oh mush mouth ass nigga. I like that staccato flow. Straight Heat. You prolly the best.

  250. Boosie Says:

    Master 3- I thought I was listening to some cat that rapped from linkin Park….Flow was too rigid…lyrics was tight, especially that step and fetchit line….You sound like a dude in a video who just stand in one place when he rap and got a sword in his hand and dressed in all black…you sound like a serial killer fam….it was aight though.

  251. Boosie Says:

    Relyk 500- Wow, that shit was trash…..and funny too….ever heard of a pause or a comma?…..and why you keep cursing?……are you a dude or a girl….I unno…this is some ol bert and ernie shit….Sorry fam…but if I don’t give it to you real, then you aint gon try harder….and Shawty Lo is miles ahead of you fam, despite what you think of him. and that last line about sucking your big white dick was just ignant and prolly an oxymoron…Step away from the mic from a while and practice.

  252. Boosie Says:

    Wise and Uptown were the best I have heard…….aka royce and D-wade…….others were okay…but these two dudes obviously bring a lil more to the table than just spitting out words…

    These cats are like painters and pay attention to detail…they accent here, drop their voice down there, they pause here, they get higher there…all the other detail stuff that goes along with rapping…..they are craftsmen with the lyrics…

  253. Billz Says:

    This is just a stunt to get you to buy his cd that just went wood.

  254. StephenKING Says:

    Boosie is a clown lol

    since he said i sound like Em and i have an NY style imma take that as a complement since Em is one of my fav and NY started this hip hop shit in the first place.

    but u might wanna try being more respectfull
    being a judge and being an asshole dosent mix too good

    but fuck it i know what i have to work on

  255. Laws Says:

    eh…guess ill repost

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/1508098685216e40/

  256. Wise Says:

    LOLOL@Boosie. You had me CRACKIN’ UP with the broke DeWayne Wade crack. LOL. And I will admit…I started getting mush mouth towards the end. LOL. That’s 32-bars straight….with no pausing. (ALTHOUGH it took me like 4 times to get it right. LOL)

    I appreciate the love fam. And all the comments…thank you. That means a lot to me.

  257. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    if yall still havnt listened, here is the link. get at ya dude though and let me know what you think. my myspace link is below as well if yall wanna get at me over there. chuchhhhh like usual and west up. how does the voting work too and who is actually deciding the winner if yall know. chuchhh

    http://zshare.net/audio/148367125cbdcd16/

  258. UPTOWNSWUITE Says:

    if yall still havnt listened, here is the link. get at ya dude though and let me know what you think. my myspace link is below as well if yall wanna get at me over there. chuchhhhh like usual and west up. how does the voting work too and who is actually deciding the winner if yall know. chuchhhh

    http://zshare.net/audio/148367125cbdcd16/

  259. Jaison Says:

    Wise should win it all. I promise the world that he will take the industry by storm as long as he stays to him.

  260. E Harris Says:

    I vote Wise! Your lyrics got through to me, your flow was appealing, and your swagger is just ill!

  261. Delilah Blaze Says:

    NO NO NO….. Wise got it! Check this out!
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-hkCSoCdhl8

  262. Boosie Says:

    Laws- Ol fortune cookie jin sounding ass nigga. Had one of the better flows in this joint. But Dancing has been part of the black community for ages, I don’t understand why you mad at niggas dancing when the Lost boyz used to dance, Biggie danced and Run DmC….Only niggas that didn’t dance because they couldn’t a la and Jay and Rakim. But yeah you a a hot flow, it was pretty nice

  263. Laws Says:

    I’m not ragging on dancing, bruh.

    Lindyhop 4 lyfe, lol.

    Just putting things in perspective. Thanx btw

  264. Laws Says:

    and, im latino.

    so i have my share of knowledge with cultures/dancing

  265. Lia Says:

    Alright…

    I read all the comments and listened to/watched as many entries as my eyes and ears could tolerate. Basically, WISE has it hands down. His presence, delivery, style, confidence, and lyrics speak some real shit. Hes the kinda dude that can hold attention because you gotta listen in order to comprehend the complexity of his rhymes.

    WISE…..
    ENOUGH SAID!

  266. BigGunn Says:

    Boosie – LMAO!!!!! Wow man, you give the phrase “sweet and sour” new meaning. Thanks for taking the time too listen to, and comment on my entry as well. I gotta say that Humpty / Shock G is one of my favs. I guess it shows, lol.

  267. Nanyanen Says:

    Wise and Laws came w dat spit. I was feelin those verses.

    And Boosie… GTFOH. Some of what ur chatting is constructive but on the whole your disrespecting a group of people who are putting themselves out there. Where is your verse?

  268. Wise Says:

    LOLOL@Boosie. You had me CRACKIN’ UP with the broke DeWayne Wade crack. LOL. And I will admit…I started getting mush mouth towards the end. LOL. That’s 32-bars straight….with no pausing. (ALTHOUGH it took me like 4 times to get it right. LOL)

    I appreciate the love fam. And all the comments…thank you. That means a lot to me.

  269. Will Perdue Says:

    Yo Wise you did your thing, point blank, you went right to work, your hunger and passion for the state of hip hop showed keep your pen moving. E. Curt

  270. Heartless_prick Says:

    On sum real shiyet, most of these verses were fresh to def, and some were wiggity wack, but I was feeling Tha Advakit guys verse the most, the lyrics were on point.

  271. Rel Says:

    Wise hands down!

    Rel
    myspace.com/trakatiksmusic
    trakatiksmusic@gmail.com

  272. bobby phils Says:

    I’m throwin my vote for biggunn

  273. Kon Def Says:

    BigGunn’s got my vote!

  274. Eugeneart Says:

    I vote for BIGGGUNN ya dig.

  275. TheBlaylocks Says:

    Wise got my vote..Subject matter, swag, flow…

  276. Wages Says:

    Wise killed it….Don’t sleep him!!!

  277. DreamBIG Says:

    Wise Killed It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep Your Focus!!!

  278. DreamBIG Says:

    Wise Killed It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep Your Focus!!!

  279. DreamBIG Says:

    Wise Killed It!!!!! Keep The Focus!!!!!!

  280. nation Says:

    just moderated comments from:

    arait, The Mighty Mobility, Ms. Darden, YouKnowWhatItIs, The Truth, Billz, Wise, UPTOWNSWUITE, Jaison, E Harris, Delilah Blaze, Lia, bobby phils, Kon Def, TheBlaylocks, Wages, DreamBIG

  281. MisterGood Says:

    I vote for BigGunn

  282. ecol Says:

    Yo this dude Big Gunn is nice!! My vote is for him.

  283. DPRO Says:

    WISE KILLED IT…..DO IT MAN

  284. Tru Gwap Fa Sure Says:

    yo..my top three is Wise, Big Gunn and Tony Nova. keep doing it fellas…

  285. C.A.S.H. Says:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/157144095439899c/

  286. Leslie Says:

    Wise has it. No doubt about it. I’m just trying to get nosebleeds to the concert!

  287. digital scales Says:

    I JUST COPPED THAT HOOD TREASON, ITS PRETTY DOPE

  288. corned beef Says:

    WISE KILLED IT!!!

    real talk, the other dudes could’ve phoned that sh*t in. lol

  289. Tha Advakit Says:

    So, when does the voting officially stop? lol

  290. Tha Advakit Says:

    BTW, here’s mine again: http://www.zshare.net/audio/14903476abd50654/

  291. Master 3 Says:

    Heres mine again:

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/150754632eb49d5f/

    and Advakit’s got my vote.

  292. C.A.S.H. Says:

    I vote for that nigga C.A.S.H.!!!

  293. Larry Says:

    My two cents goes to C.A.S.H. Off top the best!

  294. Boosie Says:

    SMH at this dude laws waiting on my review for him. I must have missed his upload and didn’t review him. After I reviewed what I thought was all the entries, he was like “eh…I’ll repost mine again”……LOL…..I waited like 2 days to review his entry just to play chess and see how he was going to respond…..After I posted my review this nigga responded like 30 minutes later, LMAO…..I’m like this dude was refreshing his computer every 5 minutes to see what I was going to say about his entry…..Shit was madd funny.

    But It was alot of nice cats on here that could spit….The reason why I chose to review the way I did was to provide some realness and entertainment…What fun would It have been if I just said a bunch of declarative statements that are mad boring…I didn’t mean to offend most people….Some people I hope were offended because of their wack ass raps….But I thought the competition was pretty good….

    I was surprised at how most cats took it in good fun….Thats what it was about….harsh but fun all rolled into one…Like Big gunn said it was sweet and sour….It was basically the love/hate review….NO Im NOT a rapper, I can’t spit but I know what sounds good….

    People respect criticism more than they like something…..this is what I have come to find out over the years….Big difference between respect and like….People will like you better if you are real and upfront rather than just a likable cat…..So I say this to say…..If you got any other pieces of music that you want to hear the HONEST truth….send me those joints at scrzap@gmail.com….and I’ll give you a review to determine if its hot or not or what you need to work on…..Hey its free criticism and you can’t beat that.

  295. Laws Says:

    boosie..what the fuck are you talking about.

    i respect your opinion, but this whole “im gonna be super sarcastic for brownie points with fellow douchebgs” shit is lame.

  296. Wise Says:

    Thanks everyone for the comments.

    When is the competition over? And how do they determine the winner?

  297. BigGunn Says:

    Thanks for all the votes and comments.

    General Question:

    Who is watching over this contest? Anyone still out there…?

  298. Master 3 Says:

    Is this…happening? Will a winner be chosen…ever…?

  299. Tha Advakit Says:

    i thought the winner was being annoucned today?

  300. BigGunn Says:

    oh word? Where did you hear that Advakit?

  301. Tha Advakit Says:

    BigGunn, check this link out. I saw it a few days ago when nahright posted that video bout NYOIL endorsing the green party candidates. I don’t know what’s the deal now cuz it’s now Aug. 17th, and no winner is announced..SMH

    http://www.nahright.com/2008/08/11/nyoil-endorses-green-candidates-cynthia-mckinney-rosa-clemente/

  302. BigGunn Says:

    Thanks man. Maybe the winner was announced in another post, just as the winner announcement was announced in another post…

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  305. haterade Says:

    blam this piece of crap

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